sweater

11 07 2008

This is the best product for you. 

This is the only one product fits for you. 

There is no time for you to ponder.

This offers comfort anytime you travels all over the world.

Canada, United States, Mexico, Africa, Europe.

This product will stand strong for years of hard use.

Working, sleeping, jogging, there is no worry about breaking this product.

This extremely popular original Montana Morning sweatshirt is constructed of a hefty jersey-knit 12.75-oz.

You have never met such a marvelous product before.

No other product is luxurious than this.

We used the best materials for this product.

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5 responses

11 07 2008
advcomp

What is the product? You should mention in the main body text, in addition to the text or the image.
> the best product for you
This is the prouct you must have been waiting for a purchase. Here it is, just for you. — You can be more aggressive, if you may.
> This is the only one product fits for you.
2 verbs in the sentence. It is dangling.
> There is no time for you to ponder.
to ponder — > to hesitate / to postopone purchasing
You do not have to wait another season for you to make a purchase
> will stand strong for years of hard use.
stand –> thesauruas to check, if you may.
> about breaking this product.
break — too strong –> to wear out? check ‘durable’ in a thesaurus.
> luxurious than this
比較級の用法 A is more / xxxer than B

11 07 2008
advcomp

I regret that I could not post the comments earlier. Have a great summer! Stay healthy!

11 07 2008
advcomp

> We used the best materials for this product.
We never use such a phrase!
We are proud to present to you this product in the best material/wool.
You deserve wearing this product in the best materials we collected from xxxx.

13 07 2008
advcomp

Another simple text2speech: AbleReader
http://atbb.jp/myasuda/viewtopic.php?p=326#326

27 07 2008
haginotyaya

Thank you professor!
Have a great summer too!

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